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代写留学生论文如何实现简明生动

时间:2018-11-01 16:34来源:www.ukthesis.org 作者:英国论文网 点击联系客服: 客服:Damien
一篇优秀的留学生论文在语言表达上应该是什么样?只是拥有复杂的句式、高级的词汇、大量的短语词组?在小编,留学生论文大多属于学术论文,并不需要太过华丽的表达,简明生动才是重要的。国外有句话是这么说的:Never use ten words where five will do.那留学生论文如何才能做到简明生动呢?下面小编教大家两个技巧。
1、简化句子结构,增强活力和表现力
① 以it,here, or there be开头且指引的是句中的名词,同时句子里常常跟上to be/ to do的句子结构,比如it is, it was, here is, there is, therewill be……这些结构往往不再强调句中实际的驱动者成分,把true driver的意义稀释了,而且这种结构通常需要其他关系词来支撑和联接,如who, that and when,进一步dilute你的文章。具体来说,比如:
There are some bloggers who seem to have...
这里的thereare 把句子的重心放在了模糊的概念there上,而不是句中的true focus,即some bloggers, 而且作者还需要加上who这个语法上需要但实际没什么含义的关系词。这样就用了三个不必要的filler words(填充词),另一方面还把句中的实义动词弱化了。顺便提个醒,不要碰到“有”就想到there be句型。
再举一些例子:
✗ Wordy:It's fun to editing.
✔ Concise:Editing is fun.
✗ Wordy:There are many people who write.
✔ Concise:Many people write.
✗Wordy:Here are some things to consider:
✔Concise:Some things to consider are:
② 适当地把后置定语从句改成前置形容词,比如:
✗Wordy:Do not try to anticipate those events that will completely revolutionize society.
✔Concise:Do not try to anticipate revolutionary events.
③ 把伴随动作状语改成副词,比如:
✗Wordy:Sympathizing with her concerns, he nodded in response to her complaint.
✔Concise:He nodded sympathetically in response to her complaint.
④“which is” 、 “who were”等有时可以删除但保留原义且无伤语法,比如:
✗Wordy:We drove down Lombard Street, which is considered the crookedest street in the world.
✔Concise:We drove down Lombard Street,considered the crookedest street in the world.
⑤ 介词短语改写,比如:
✗Wordy: The opinion of the working group.
✔Concise: The working group's opinion.
2、可以用动词来描述的时候就尽量避开弱化语气的名词化表达
比如当你看到“verb+ a/an noun” 的组合结构,直接用实义动词来代替该短语,简化句子的同时增强句子活力。比如:
✗Wordy:The report gave an analysis of the accident.
✔Concise:The report analyzed the accident.
✗Wordy:Give your post a proofread.(责任编辑:quanlei_cai)


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