I am a junior student coming from Arts & Metiers ParisTech in France which is a mechanical engineering school and whose main task is cultivating general engineer. I have a good command of professional knowledge, and I am also capable in practice through study and experiment. However, I still long for a further study and improving professional skills, so I look forward to majoring in design of rotating machine at cranfield university in UK.
还有，为什么我渴望在克兰菲尔德大学的进一步研究四个方面的原因。首先，我疼欲望体验，并有有在不同的专业，而不是一般的工程学院专业学习的综合性大学的教育。其次，我迫切需要提高我的英语。这是有很大帮助的求职掌握英语，法语和我的母语中国。最后，我意识到，我对机械很感兴趣，而且一般来说我在我的第一学年的一些课程，如应力分析，轴承设计和齿轮设计一个很好的报告，所以我的知识已经掌握laies了坚实的基础对我来说，进一步研究旋转机械的设计。There are four reasons why I long for an further study in cranfield university. Firstly, I ache with desire to experience and have education of a comprehensive university which has professional studies in different majors rather than a general engineering school. Secondly, I need to improve my English urgently. It is of great help in job hunting mastering English, French and my mother tongue Chinese. Lastly, I realize that I have great interest in machinery, and generally speaking I have a good report at some courses in my first school year, such as stress analysis, bearing design and gear design, so the knowledge I have mastered laies a solid foundation for me to further study design of rotating machine.
I am confident I will have a good performance if your esteemed school would like to give me the entrance chance. On the one hand, my social experiences help me a lot. I have a good adaptive ability and I can merge into new environment quickly. For example, I had no idea about French as a foreigner at the very beginning, and I had never been in touch with French when I graduated from senior high school. After that I started to study french, and I entered Arts & Metiers ParisTech after three years of study. My work experiences make me deal with interpersonal relationship very well. I worked in a Chinese restaurant in the past, and I alsoworked as a trainee at Photonics Bretagne.
On the other hand, I perform well at school. I have a good understanding in theory and I can understand the formula analysis thoroughly, moreover I like to share my opinions with members in group work, so I am competent for group work with students coming from different countries at Cranfield University. And I want to be a mechanical design engineer in motor corporation in the future, and majoring in design of rotating machine at cranfield university is of great help for the position.(责任编辑：anne)