Trends
趋势

Topic 1 Literature review:
主题1 文献综述：

The majority of students demonstrated an extensive review of empirical literature and a good analysis of the findings. However, the majority of students did not demonstrate practical applications of their findings and analysis by translating these into suggestions for a hiring line manager.
大多数学生的实证文献显示了广泛的审查和良好的分析的结果。然而，大多数学生并没有表现出他们的调查结果和分析的实际应用，把这些招聘经理建议。

Topic 2 Case Study:
主题2 案例研究

Students on the whole tended to first profile the organisation’s recruitment and selection practices and then analyse them, after which they provided some recommendations for change.  Some reports were heavily balanced towards profiling the organisation rather than critiquing the recruitment and selection practices. 
组织的招聘和选拔的做法，学生总体上倾向于第一个配置文件，然后分析他们后，他们提供了一些建议，改变。一些报道严重平衡对分析的组织，而不是批评的招聘和选拔的做法。

Whilst some demonstrated in-depth understanding of the theoretical concepts in how they critiqued the organisation’s recruitment and selection practices, the majority showed a basic understanding of the theoretical concepts but did not apply it in their analysis of the organisation’s recruitment and selection practices.

A number of students made generalisations without contextualising their arguments.  Many students also tended to in their recommendations briefly assert changes to the organisation’s recruitment and selection practices without demonstrating their analysis of this issue in the body of the essay.

Common Observations for Topic 1 & 2 responses:
主题1＆2反应的共同观测：

On the whole students demonstrated:
全体学生表明：

 very good appreciation of recruitment and selection theoretical concepts
 very good research skills

Strengthening required in the following areas:
需要在以下几个方面加强：

 Harvard Referencing skills in the body of the essay and in the bibliography
 formulating coherent arguments
 critical thinking skills to provide in-depth analysis
 English writing skills

References
参考

 First, read your subject outline about why you need to reference. Then (option 1) go to , choose the link about referencing. This will give you advice. The Harvard referencing page (the one you must use in Commerce) will tell you how to format every possible kind of reference.
首先，阅读的主体轮廓为什么你需要引用。然后（选项1）去,选择有关引用链接。这会给你的意见。哈佛引用页面（你必须使用商务部）会告诉你如何格式化每一个可能的一种参考。#p#分页标题#e#

Alternatively (option 2), open your textbook at the end of any chapter, and use the references there to guide you.

Structuring your report
构建你的报告

 Either use the handout I gave you in class as a guide, or use any alternative source on how to write reports. Alternatively, just google the topic 'report writing'. The source will always give you advice about structure.

 It is a good idea not to leave the +ve and -ve issues of your organisation's hiring until the end. Students do not leave themselves space to do this well, and it is the most important part of the assignment.

For topic 1, I am not fussy about the format. An essay approach is fine.

 In general
大体

 For students who are not sure about all this, it is very important to find out. There are workshops and other sources of help available at UoW. See in particular StartSmart and other Tertiary Literacies programs on the 'Resources for Students' page.
对于学生，谁不知道这一切，这是非常重要的找出来。 UOW的帮助的讲习班和其他来源。请参阅特别StartSmart的学生页的“资源和其他大专院校的扫盲计划。

 Finally
最后

 If you still have questions, email me and I will try to help. If you need some more time for your assignment because of illness or other serious problem beyond your control, get a doctor's certificate or other documentation and apply for academic consideration.
如果您还有疑问，请给我发电子邮件，我会尽力帮助。如果您需要更多的时间，你的任务，因为你无法控制的疾病或其他重大问题，得到医生的证书或其他文件和申请作学术审议。