English essay: Finding what you have lost
I am an engineer, job folder is very important for my work. When I work in laboratory, I always keep the folder in my hand, I can write down anything that I find during experiments. It is convenient for me.
I lost one of my folders yesterday. It was just missing. I looked for it in my office and laboratory, I asked everyone, I couldn't find it out. I prepared another folder today, all files had been re-written. I spent nearly whole day to re-do the experiments because all data were lost with the folder.
I finished all before getting off work finally. I went to the meeting room to have a cup of coffee to relax. Oh my God! My lost folder lies on the table. I thought about it, I had a short meeting with one client in this meeting room yesterday and I put my folder on the table. I forgot to bring it back after I said goodbye to my client!
Now I have two folders for one case.
Overall Teacher Comments
Dear student, thank you for your very interesting submission, it was a pleasure to read. You need to work on word limit, capitalisation, and spelling. Instead of writing "T lost my one of my folders" you can write it as "I lost one of my folders". A definite article such as "the" is used to refer to a specific instance of the noun, often already mentioned in the context Or easy to identify. "Use an before words beginning with vowels or when a consonant initial has a vowel sound. All proper nouns like the names of people, places, profession, nationality, days, months, etc, need to be capitalized. The pronoun 'T' always needs to be capitalized. Word limits are prescribed not to make it difficult for the student but to enable him to write better and improve at every level, in order to enhance his vocabulary and writing skills. So please give importance to the word limit and send another writing for uation, pertaining to the word limit. Good luck- Tricy I
亲爱的学生，感谢您非常有趣的投稿，读起来非常愉快。你需要注意字数限制、资本化和拼写。你可以把它写成“我丢失了一个文件夹”而不是“don ' T lost my one of my folders”。定冠词，如“the”，用来指名词的一个具体实例，通常在上下文中已经提到或很容易识别。在以元音开头的单词或辅音开头有元音的单词前使用an。所有专有名词，如人名、地名、职业、国籍、日期、月份等，都需要大写。代词“T”总是需要大写。字数限制不是为了给学生造成困难，而是为了让他的写作水平提高，以提高他的词汇量和写作技巧。因此，请重视字数限制，并发送另一篇关于字数限制的作文进行评估。祝你好运。
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