留学生Essay写作指南：以“废除死刑”为例的高分Assignment深度解析
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最近是不是又到了各科狂交 Essay 和 assignment 的地狱模式？特别是读文科、法学或者社会学的小伙伴，碰到诸如“死刑存废（The extinction of death punishment）”这种极其经典的辩论型题目，是不是一头雾水？查了一堆资料，结果正反方观点搅在一起，完全不知道怎么搭结构？
学长太懂这种盯着空白Word文档发呆的绝望感了！写这种 Argumentative Essay，最忌讳的就是观点摇摆不定。为了帮大家理清思路，今天学长特意给大家扒出来一篇极其优秀的本科高分范文。这篇范文不仅中英双语对照，而且逻辑非常清晰，从历史沿革、人权角度到最终的折中结论，层层递进，非常值得借鉴。
当然啦，学长也知道很多时候咱们留学生不是没有思路，而是各种 Due 撞在一起，根本没时间慢慢磨出一篇好文章。如果你眼看着 Deadline 逼近，实在分身乏术，找一个专业靠谱的 essay代写 或者 Assignment代写 导师拉你一把，绝对是最明智的自救方案。咱们 优客网ukthesis1999创建拥有26年历史论文代写平台 里的名校大神导师随时待命，绝对能帮你化险为夷。
话不多说，大伙儿先赶紧跟着学长一起来品一品这篇干货满满的范文吧！
(👇 以下为高分范文原文，一字不漏完整分享 👇)
美国英语专业留学生本科essayassignment代写辅导-The extinction of death punishment
认为应该废除死刑处罚有以下几个原因： 首先在人类的历史中，如此众多的国家已经废除死刑的惩罚。例如，从747到759，中国古代废除这种惩罚方式。从818到1156，已经废除死刑处罚在日本。 1395年，十二结论罗拉德派表示，死亡的惩罚应该结束;，大公利奥波德二世颁布了第一个现代废除。 1849年，死亡惩罚已被禁止在罗马共和国。这意味着废除死刑处罚的好处，即使我们的祖先已经确定。随着社会的发展，它应该被接受，我们所有的人所承认。
死亡惩罚应该废除。 目前，许多国家已经废除了死刑。根据大赦国际的统计，直到2011，只有21个国家仍然利用这种惩罚的方法。本文的作者，这一趋势的谓词，死刑废止是必然的。但应逐步实现。这意味着它不是一件事情一夜就完成的。它是从上一个进程底。每个国家都根据自己的具体情况做。虽然罪犯自由取下其他人的生活，作为一个人，我们不应该给予同样的待遇，给他或她，因为它不会带来社会的发展使社会放慢。
Introduction Currently death punishment has been abolished in so many nations. Even like this, more than 60% of the world’s population is still living in the environment with death punishment. This short text will discuss about whether death punishment should be still applied from two opposite attitudes: against and support. Author of this paper’s attitude will also be given out at the end of this paper.
Death Punishment should be abolished People who believed that death punishment should be abolished have following reasons: First in the history of human being, death punishment has been abolished in so many nations. For example from 747 to 759, ancient China abolished this punishing way. From 818 to 1156, death punishment has been abolished in Japan. In 1395, the Twelve Conclusions of the Lollards has stated that death punishment should be ended; Grand Duke Leopold II issued the 1st modern abolition. In 1849, death punishment has been banned in Roman Republic. This means the benefits of abolition death punishment has been identified even by our forefathers. Along with the social development, it should be accepted and acknowledged by all of us.
Secondly death punishment is not only cruel, but also inhuman and degrading. For Amnesty International, deal punishment is seen as "the ultimate denial of Human Rights" in the mind of Amnesty International. Just as the famous legal scholar, Moses Maimonides’ statement, if execution an accused criminal not on absolute certainty might lead to slippery slope. All human being has the natural right to live into this world. Deal penalty might be used as excuses to infringe other people’s lives and harm their basic human right. For example in the Great Terror time of Soviet, over 1 million ordinary citizens have been executed death punishment. In Cultural Revolution time of China, there were also so many ordinary people those have been executed death punishment. From this aspect, for not coming to be an excuse of some big people, death punishment also should be abolished. #p#分页标题#e# Thirdly observing the current application situation of death punishment, it can be found that most developed countries have abolished death punishment; and only the poor and authoritarian country and regime still promise death punishment existing. This implies that abolishment of death punishment is one trend which cannot be stopped in the history of human being. Along with the time development and social progress, it is the final result. Death Punishment should not be abolished
People, who do not support death punishment abolishing, also have their own reasons. Tracing the history of death punishment, even in the beginning stage of recorded history, this punishment existed. Death punishment has come to be one part of justice system. In ordinary crime situation, ordinary punishment approaches can be enough to deter and punish the criminals, but toward the seriously and extremely bad criminal behaviors, death punishment must be utilized.
What is more, whether death punishment should be deleted? This is a complicate question which involves complicated background, such as the special culture, education level, common citizens’ attitude, social value etc. If the chance is not mature enough, extinction of death punishment will produce more harm not good. Thirdly thinking about the extinction of death punishment from the other aspect, whether death punishment being abolished means the social becomes more civilized and developed? This cannot be agreed by any of us. If extinction the death punishment, victim and his or her family might feel unequal; law and regulation should not be the religious dogma. It should define forgive and forgetting as the main objective. It must have certain social deterrent force, the moral baseline, punishment correspond with guilty and duty. If some people can freely deprive some other’s life, he or she must undertake the equal punishment.
Death Punishment should be abolished. Currently so many countries have abolished the death punishment. According to the statistic of Amnesty International, until 2011, there were only 21 countries those still utilized this punishment approach. For the author of this paper, this predicates one trend that extinction of death punishment is an inevitable. But it should be realized step by step. This means it is not one thing being finished an overnight. It is one process from top to bottom. Each nation will do it according to its own specific situation. Although criminals freely take off other people’s life, as a human being, we should not give the same treatment to him or her, since it does not bring the social development; just make the society be slow down. Conclusion
Summing up all the above statement, author of this paper believes that death punishment should be abolished and it must be abolished in the future. But it is the result of a process. It cannot be done overnight. Extinction of death punishment implies the social progress.
【学长课后点评与避坑总结】
呼~ 一口气看下来，大家有没有觉得豁然开朗？
这篇文章最讨巧的地方就在于，它没有一上来就盲目站队，而是先客观陈述了赞成废除（Abolish）和反对废除（Not abolish）双方的论点，最后再非常巧妙地引出作者自己的核心观点——“死刑废除是大趋势，但必须循序渐进（realized step by step）”。这种充满批判性思维（Critical Thinking）的论述方式，绝对是老外教授最爱给高分的套路！
不过学长也要给大家敲个黑板：很多留学生的脑洞其实很大，结构也想得挺好，但一落笔，就容易写出满满的“中式英语（Chinglish）”，论点再好，语言不过关也会被无情降级。
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